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gonna put this here.

we didn't do enough molly when i wasn't scared of it and acid is getting harder to find and nobody sells real shit anymore, it's cut with heroin, meth, fucking dried cum, whatever

i'm
just
real
sick
of getting
high

for kicks
when

all i'm kicking is my own ass,
for that thought or that word
or that tone or that thing i said
yesterday that hurt your feelings and

all you're kicking
is the can we put the cigarette butts
in on the front porch and the 'ping
ping, ping' is comforting yet
alarming and

there's that thing they say,
couples who lift together
stay together or
couples who smoke together
stay together or
couples who run together
stay together
and all of those other bullshit
sayings people use to make each other
feel okay about the one fucking thing
they have in common and

babe, let me tell you, i don't
know how we could be any more
different, or any more similar
without being cruel to our
understanding of how things
are and how they're supposed
to work.

i guess what i'm really trying
to say
is

i'm just glad that i have you.
and i'm glad we aren't just
sitting around getting
high like we used to
and i'm glad we've
made beauty out
of the failures
that we choose to.
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:iconannabellem:
annabellem Mar 24, 2014  New member Student Writer
thanks for joining LitCritiques! be sure to read About Us or feel free to ask me if you have any questions! <3
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:iconbluesoulgreenmind:
I miss your prose I remember a story about two characters: jade and Johnny. I was always curious if you'd ever expand on that story.
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diddlyhohum Mar 9, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
the one about the church? i think i used johnny as the name for every male protagonist in every one of my lil short stories haha
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:iconbluesoulgreenmind:
Yep that's the one! I tried looking for it but I forgot the title.
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diddlyhohum Mar 14, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
i took that one down awhile ago but several people have actually asked about it since then and i've been meaning to put it back up, but i don't remember the title either and i'll have to dig through my storage sometime.
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:iconunspecifiedunknown:
hannah when i visit you
we're going to do that dream you had of me ;)
smile about every bitch who made us into monsters 
just to justify their pain. smile about how pretty 
water looks and feels with molly's company
braid each other's hair, drunk and 
write poetry. 
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diddlyhohum Feb 22, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
yes and smoke and go on lil adventures and get sad when it's okay to get sad and talk through the whole fucking world together, yeah
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vespera Dec 20, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:rose: thank you for the watch!
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:iconsetmyworldintomotion:
happy birthday! ^_^
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diddlyhohum Dec 9, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
thank you!
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